unownedJR's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CT: Prophet Battles]

I totally fucking agree

you do suck, the only highlight was the good soundtrack, and it had none of your own importing, plus it was wasted on this crappy fight seen in whichit was a take turn, in action!
and then there was the lame joke about magus was just pathedic, lame, and not funny

oh, and don't get pissed off at other toon critics just because they don't look at the score and immediatley write a good review, liike you want them to

Put your computer away and just think for a moment, and when you are done, you should hope that you can come up with a good excuse for wasting peoples time

Premo responds:

just think of how much time you wasted reviewing it. the problem with your review is that it is just an attack, no actual constructive criticism (really only one comment)

if I post a movie to newgrounds, it is impossible for me to waste your time, your the one who wastes your own time by opening it and watching it.. this is a bad movie, and was made in like 20 minutes, so thats all.

have a nice day :)

[Bitey of Brackenwood]

HOT DANG!

Well now that was a well made animation.
I liked the style that you put into the movement of the leaves and plants, the way they would flow like something in real life would, plus the characters were very well created, which shows that you have a good sense of design and creativity, very good work, and I hope that you continue this sort of animation.

Roland

[XIN Session 08]

Dammit

You're not giving yourself enough time to do this steven, what you're dong wrong is you are not focussing enough on the drawings, every now and then it starts to look worse than something that I could do, and this is something that you should look out for, cause otherwise your series may turn out to be one of those duds that stop after it becomes popular.

Steven, if you can, try to get a Graphics tablet, (one of those pens that are used as a mouse as well), they can help a lot with your art, oh and like that other guy said, ease up on the light that comes off the characters face

[Chrono Trigger: Betrayel]

Awesome man

Hey Moogleslayer, it's Roland, just wanted to say THAT THIS TOON OWNS!
Here's a few reasons why.....

1) good use of sprites
2)sound was well in sync
3)nice double ending
4)cool dialouge that was well mixed with the music
5)My name was in the credits : )
6)Funny ending for chrono
7)sprite cartoons are awesome
8)and so is chrono trigger
9)TOAD KICKS MAJOR ASS!

[Super Mario Reloaded]

VG ain't got nothing

man, shit, an I thought that VG was goodat sprite movies, FUCK! that was superb, oh sure, the sprites at some rare points were hard to make out, but the animation was sweet! I can't believe you made those sprites of him backfliping, and the aerial shots were extremley impressive, and sort of looked like the real thing with a bad GFX Card. All in all, a very good movie, tops most of the others here at NG, since they only last a couple of minutes. Don't stop this kickass shit.

Roland

[Zeros True Mission]

Nice!

I think that this is quite a good film, and had a good use of sprites too, I'm looking forward to the next one, but I'm kinda sick of people using crappy fonts, if you want something decent, goto www.flashkit.com and look for the fonts

Roland

[Death Of Skating]

Wwwwweeeeelllllllll

Here's a few tips, if you make the scene fade out, be sure to select everything on that frame, and select ctrl B to break it into little bits so you don't make some parts higher in Alpha than others, ie: the head and the shoulders.

Plus don't use whole song albums, just shorten it, then import it so it makes the file smaller
Cya

Roland

[Cat Fan]

Very Funny

That was clever, style of animation I see very rarely on NG

Fucking hilarious when the cat goes 'THUD!' on the floor like that.

Roland

[Chrono Trigger: New Era]

This is good, keep doing this stuff...

For a first submission, very good, I think you are naturally good at this kind of thing, seeing that you used good sprites for the fighting, and it didn't look to sloppy, like most sprite based submissions, Although, I think you should work on making the dialouge look a little more authentic, in the text that is, the language was much like a chrono trigger sort of thing, just work on the fonts, that's all

Roland

Moogleslayer responds:

Thx for noticeing the sprites i used.. considering how it was so zoomed out (im still trying to master zooming)if u find a working crono trigger font send me the link i want my next one to be longer and flawless and thx for noticing Magus's diologue i tried very hard to make it sound like him